Star Wars: Episode II: Twilight of the Republic

 The CLONE WARS rage over

the Galaxy.  For one thousand

years the GALACTIC REPUBLIC

maintained peace, but now

rebellious star systems seek to

overthrow the Republic and

gain independence.

 One by one dissident systems

fall to the advancing Republic

Navy.  Only the remote

Mudros System remains.  As

destroyers close in on the last

rebel ships, hope fades for those

resisting the Republic's domination...

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 Pan across stars, a large planet is in the foreground.  A small ship flies in from the top of the frame moving away from the viewer, it fires a series of red lasers back in the direction it came.  A massive ship appears across the top of the frame, it is in hot pursuit of the smaller ship and fires a series of green lasers at the fleeing quarry.  The large ship pulls slowly overhead and is finally revealed to be a massive Star Destroyer with three large blue drive cones on the back.  The Destroyer batters the smaller ship relentlessly with turbo laser fire and there are a series of explosions across its surface, the engines cut out and it begins to drift helplessly.  The Destroyer closes in.

Inside the small ship there is chaos, smoke, soldiers and crew running this way and that.  Troops are lining up in front of a large blast door leading to the airlock.  Suddenly the ship shakes, the soldiers look about in fear, the large ship is pulling in the smaller.

 Outside the Destroyer swoops in like a titanic wave, many thousands of times greater in mass than the smaller ship, it looms like a bird of prey, drawing in its catch towards a docking bay on the underside.  Perspective switches, you see the planet, dappled brown and green beneath the Destroyer, behind it arrayed above the atmosphere in various altitudes and orientations are over a dozen more Star Destroyers, floating threateningly over the surface.  It is clearly a total victory.

 Back inside the small ship the soldiers become more fearful and the ship shudders as it is finally pulled into the docking bay.  Weapons are aimed at the door and positions taken, some stand and some are on one knee.  There is a whining grating sound, sparks fly from the edges of the door, then a deep boom echoes through the corridor, followed by red blaster fire careening through the smoke and debris.  The soldiers return fire, several are hit, their chests exploding in fiery ruin, white masked and armored troopers burst from the breech door, their armor is gleaming, black respirators grimace in an angry frown.  They unleash a torrent of fire from black standard issue blasters, one, then another falls but they are replaced as their ranks swell through the doorway.  

 Overwhelmed, the surviving resisters retreat down the corridor, pursued closely by the troopers.  The smoke clears, a man steps through the doorway, two elite troopers flank him.  He wears stormtrooper armor but no helmet, revealing a middle aged man with full beard and flowing brown hair.  His piercing blue eyes survey the situation, no emotion passing across his face, his expression is hard, obviously used to the sight of war and death.  He walks forward past the carnage.  At a cross corridor he is met by a trooper. 

 Trooper:  General Kenobi, we have secured the command deck and engineering section, all crew members are in custody.  We are proceeding with data salvage and shutdown operations.

 Obi wan:  Good work Captain, inform the boarding party to disembark as soon as all data and goods have been seized, set charges on the reactor and destroy the ship as soon as we move the destroyer within safe distance.

Trooper:  Yes sir!

 The trooper turns away, Kenobi turns and walks back the way he came.  We follow him as the walks through scenes of battle, not reacting to the grotesque images, he enters the hatch and finally reaches the bridge of his star destroyer, there are officers about.  Kenobi stands on the upper deck looking out over the planet, a few star destroyers are visible in orbit.  Presently a communications officer approaches.

 Officer:  General Kenobi, based on the newly captured data we have decrypted the frequency modulation of the planetary energy shield.  Ops reports we can begin bombardment at your command.

 Obi wan:  Thank you Lt. 

 He reaches for a communicator at his belt 

 Obi wan:  Communications, open a channel with nationalist headquarters

 Officer:  Yes sir...signal connected

 Obi Wan Kenobi waits for a moment, his brow furrowed, his expression pensive.  

 Obi Wan:  This is General Kenobi of the Galactic Republic Navy, we have captured the last of your forces in orbit, it is inevitable that we will destroy your shield and what remains of your military on the surface, surrender now and you will leave with your lives.

 The reply is immediate 

 Salk:  Kenobi!  You coward, the great Lord Salk of Mudros will never surrender to the Republic tyranny, you think you've won but every Mudrosan down here is ready to die for our independence, you will have to kill us to the last man!  To the last!  They are all ready to lay down their lives for me!

 Kenobi has closed his eyes and his hand is on his brow. 

 Salk:  We will never stop resisting you, Never!  You have made a mistake Kenobi!  Mark my words, this is..

 Kenobi thumbs the communicator and the voice cuts out abruptly.  He presses it again and speaks. 

 Obi wan:  Fire control, set weapons on shield frequency, target the palace and all major military bases.  Fire at will.

 Officer:  Yes sir

 Green fire erupts from the star destroyer, tearing down in the atmosphere and exploding on the surface of the planet.  Again and again, until a there are countless fires on the planet, Obi Wan watches without expression.  The firing stops suddenly.  

 Trooper:  All targets destroyed sir.

 Obi wan nods.  

 Obi wan:  Very good Lieutenant.  General, you may begin your landing (an officer nods and leaves the room), set coordinates for Coruscant and jump to lightspeed as soon as possible.  Inform the Senate that Mudros has been neutralized.

 Officer:  Yes sir.

 Obi Wan strows across the deck and off the bridge of the star destroyer.  Outside, several destroyers descend into the atmosphere, Kenobi's destroyer pulls out of orbit and then with a flash from the engines jumps away in into the distance and disappears, bound on its journey towards the capital of the Republic.

 Scene change, Coruscant, Republic Capital

 Scene begins with Obi wan entering a large high ceilinged courtyard with lines of hover carriages and troops in shining parade armor.  Obi wan climbs onto a carriage and stands next to two troopers whom he greets, then he turns and meets eyes with a young heavy set man standing in a carriage near the back of the line.  He is Anakin Skywalker.  The man smiles and nods, Obi wan returns the gesture before facing forward where the first carriages and marching lines are moving out the massive doorway into the parade grounds.  The carriage moves automatically carrying Obi wan and the others out into the dazzling sunlight.  The grounds are a massive open thoroughfare 50 yards wide and 300 yards long, massive rows of seats stretch along the roadway, packed with beaming and excited faces, about half of them human, the other half a variety of species from across the galaxy.  Massive banners flow in the wind, hung from buildings lining the parade grounds.

 The carriages and lines of troops march down the thoroughfare, flower petals rain down thrown by extravagantly dressed festival goers.  Obi wan and the others wave at the cheering masses, their chariots bearing them automatically down the parade route, coming finally to rest in the massive square, before them is the monolithic senate building with its expansive stairway, at the top of the steps stand arrayed all the leadership of the Republic, Senators, Judges, the Jedi Council, Generals and Central Bankers, the Republic aristocracy stands victorious.  

 Now the soldiers arrayed in the square turn and form a pathway down the center, the final formations of chariots and troopers have entered the square, this group has the most elegant armor and weapons, and sitting in the center of it all, as if king, is Anakin, he smiles and waves, charismatic and beautiful, he radiates both youth and discipline.  At the square the group dismount their chariots, all the troopers stand in formation and salute as Anakin steps to the ground, saluting back he walks down the pathway through the soldiers to the wide steps of the senate building, he begins to climb, walking with ease and confidence, a serious and focused look on his face.  The wind whips by, sending his cape flowing behind him, he is an epic figure.  

 Reaching level with the Senators, he bows to an older man at the head of the group.  The man leans forward and places a medal around his neck and then bows back.  The heavy set man turns and faces the crowd, the lines of troops salute as he stands, the crowds go wild with enthusiasm.  The uncontrollable beginnings of a smile form on the man’s face.  The scene ends.

Scene Change, the Jedi Council, Anakin and Obi Wan stand in an ornate room with two dozen royally dressed Jedi sitting in a semi Circle around them.  The Jedi master at the center of the room rises, he is an elder man with a patriarchal air about him, he surveys Obi Wan and Anakin with a self righteous expression.  He is Master Oran.

 Oran:  General Skywalker has shown great courage and exemplary leadership in the face of overwhelming odds, the council has seen fit to award you the honor of the golden circle for heroism and outstanding performance.

 Anakin:  The golden circle, i couldn't, that award is only giving to those over the age of 50!

 Oran:  The council has seen fit to wave the regulations in this case, for such a deserving candidate.

 Anakin: (seeming put off)  I won’t accept until its my time, to do so would be to undermine the very foundation of the award, it would dishonor those other heroes who dedicated their whole lives to service in order to get here.

 Oran:  Well, if you wont accept, the council will not force you, but allow us to furnish you with an estate and credit accounts, it’s the least we can do!

 Anakin: (unenthusiastic) Very well.

 Oran:  Good, now, if you will excuse us, we would have a private word with Master Kenobi.

 Anakin (bowing slightly)  I take my leave

 He exits, Obi wan steps forward.

 Oran:  Master Kenobi, your pupil has advanced quite considerably, very impressive.

 Obi Wan:  Thank you.

 Oran:  With the clone wars over we had hoped General Skywalker would take a greater interest in his future and the future of the Council, we believe he could be a Senator, a Master, even Chancellor someday.  But only if he allows wiser heads to guide his career, Anakin is a great man, he doesn't need to wait years to become a Master, if only he would reach out and take what we offer him.  

 Obi Wan:  I see.

 Oran:  The council wants you to be a subtle guiding hand to him, show him the wisdom of taking what is offered, not to waste his unrealized potential.

 Obi Wan:  Very well, i will do my best to help him.

 Oran:  See that you do.  You may go.

 Obi Wan bows slightly and then turns and walks out.

 After Obi Wan leaves, the other masters turn to each other.  

 Rylon:  The boy is foolish, he must be broken of his idealism.

 Oran:  He will be, it may take time, his will is strong.

 Synethis:  I don't trust Kenobi, he is well practiced at vailing the subtle corners of his mind, even so i sense his dissent.

 Rylon:  Without proper control they could both be dangerous.  Perhaps it is wise to separate master from student?

 Oran:  Not yet, that time will come soon enough, and when it does we will harness and unleash Anakins power.

 Rylon:  Do you think Kenobi guesses our plans?  He must sense the boys power, most people think he is simply an exceptional warrior and leader, only those force sensitive can feel the waves of energy rolling off him.  I dare not guess whether the boy even realizes his exceptional nature.

 Oran:  He will soon enough…

 Scene Change,  It is a popular Cantina on Coruscant, you see Padme sitting alone at a table, presently Obi Wan and Anakin arrive and she waves excitedly to them.    The two hurry over to her table.

 Padme:  You made it!  I was starting to wonder.

 Anakin:  We wouldn't dream of missing you!

 Obiwan:  Padme, how are you?

 Padme:  Oh, i've been better, but i'm here at least so that’s something.

 Obiwan:  I heard you had a rough time of things in your last deployment.  Onderon System right?  

 Padme:  Ya, four habitable planets and one hundred moons to hide out on, there was no end to the guerrilla war.  Things got pretty desperate by the finish, supplies stretched thin, no reinforcements coming...

 Anakin:  Let’s not talk about this!  (To robot server)  Drinks!  Drinks!  Hey!  Drinks!  Come on!

 Robot:  Sorry sir what can i get you?

 Anakin is ordering a slew of food and drink, Obiwan turns to Padme.

 Obiwan:  So you've thought about what you're doing now that the wars over?

 Padem:  Hmm, well I've thought about it, not coming up with any brilliant plans.  I dunno, you?

 Obiwan:  Hmm, not so much, I've been trying to get back into my studying routines, maybe thinking of becoming a monk, leaving the warriors life behind.

 Anakin:  You are not!

 Obiwan:  I was, not sure about anything right now though.

 Anakin:  Well you better not, you've really distinguished yourself you know!  You could join the high command or even run for Senate if you like politics.  Becoming a monk?  Come on.

 Padme:  Seems better than being a Senator to me!

 Anakin:  You would think that!

 Padme:  Well I don't have to ask what YOU'RE doing!

 Anakin:  I'm protecting the Republic and serving the oath I took to the Jedi.

 Padme:  (Smirking)  Oath.  What a load of crap.

 Anakin:  Seriously?  You don't really believe that.  Why did you become a Jedi in the first place?

 Padem:  Because I THOUGHT we were fighting for the oppressed and trying to create a better society, not acting as the priest class to a messed up Imperial warrior culture.  Not what I signed up for.

 Anakin:  Ok ok, i understand...

 Robot:  Drinks!

 The server bot delivers a series of beverages and they all start drinking.

 Anakin:  Ahhh...

 Obiwan:  Still the best brew on the east side, do you remember that old pub we used to go to on Humbarine?  

 Anakin:  Of course!  Couldn't forget it!

 Padme:  Ha, ya!  I remember that place.  That bartender was a piece of work.

 Obiwan:  Ya not my favorite thing about that place for sure.

 Anakin:  The town was fun though, I dunno, wish we could travel around and just unleash like the old times!

 Obiwan:  Cheers to that!

 They drink for a moment.

 Padme:  Hey, do you guys want to come to Onderon?

 They both look at each her in surprise..

 Padme:  I heard about this great party.  My friend invited me to come, it’s in a few days, if we leave tomorrow, we could make it!

 Obiwan and Anakin look at each other with a bemused expression.

 Anakin:  Well...i dunno!

 Obiwan:  I'm sure the council would like us to stick around for more than a day after the war is over. 

 Padme:  Oh come on, it could be fun!

 Anakin:  I dunno, your idea of fun can be pretty out there, let me sleep on it!

 Padme:  Ok ok.  you all have no sense of adventure.

 Obiwan:  We can talk about it in the morning, it could be fun, I don't know, but maybe we should wait a bit.

 Padme:  The party is happening, whether we are there or not!

 She swigs her drink, the other sit back pensively.

 Scene changes, It is morning, a hallway inside a government building on Coruscant.  Sunlight shines through a large window.  Presently you see Obiwan working his way down the corridor, he looks tired, his expression unenthusiastic.  He turns and opens a door leading to an office.  A man in a Republic Navy uniform sits behind a desk.

 Officer:  General, come in.

 Obiwan:  Thank you.

 He moves forward and sits in a chair facing the desk.

 Officer:  As you might image the bureau was most interested to debrief you in person.

 Obiwan:  I did imagine.

 Officer:  Very good.  Now, can you recall details of the rebel fleets armament?  Did it seem improvised?  Back engineered?  Somehow acquired from the Republic?

 Obiwan:  Umm...well, mostly improvised, depends on the system, some systems had highly sophisticated means of production.

 Officer:  I see...now, how about training?  Did the enemy appear well prepared or mostly fresh recruits?

 Obiwan:  (visibly annoyed)  I...well...once again, depends on the system.

 Officer:  I see...now, what about fleet tactics?

 Scene changes, Obiwan exits the office looking even more exhausted.  He walks down a hallway and around a corner, a man in clerical robes spots him and waves excitedly.

 Cleric:  Master Kenobi!

 Obiwan is frustrated but stops.

 Obiwan:  Cleric Pellin, good to see you.

 Cleric:  I wondered if i might have a moment of your time!  You see, I've been working on a few new theories of Force dynamics and thought now that the war is over, of course, you might have more free time!

 Obiwan:  That’s what i thought to.

 Cleric:  Well what do you think?  It’s really a good theory, it will be worth your time I promise!

 Obiwan:  I um...(Looking over the Clerics shoulder)  Anakin!

 Anakin is passing by at that moment and looks over at Obiwan, he also appears tired.

 Obiwan:  I'm sorry i need to have a work with General Skywalker, if you will excuse me!

 Cleric:  Of course

 Obiwan hurrys off and starts walking with Anakin.

 Obiwan:  This place is driving me crazy!

 Anakin:  Uhg, me to, everyone I run into wants an interview, signature or some kind of photo op.  

 Obiwan:  Ya i guess fame isn't all it’s cracked up to be.

 Anakin:  (Giving Obiwan a rye smile)  Oh I wouldn't go that far!

 Obiwan:  (Laughing) No, of course you wouldn't

 They round a corner and run into Padme coming the other way.

 Padme:  There you are, you ready?

 Obiwan:  (Blankly)  Ready?

 Padme:  Ya, transport is leaving for Onderon in one hour.  

 Anakin:  (Laughing)  You're serious?

 Padme:  Of course!

 Obiwan:  Well...I mean...why not?

 Anakin:  Ya, ok..hell..why not?

 Obiwan:  Alright, we'll do it!

 Padme:  Yes!  Come on, get packed!  Lets go!

 They hurry off, scene changes to a hanger, Obiwan, Padme and Anakin are boarding a large transport ship.  They enter a private room with bunks, a small porthole looks out, now only showing the inside of the hanger.

 Padme:  Ok!  Here we go!

 Obiwan:  How long is the trip?

 Padme:  Day and a half.

 Anakin:  Cool, i'm getting some sleep.

 He flops onto one of the bunks and throws his arm over his face.  Padme and Obiwan look at each other with amusement.

 Padme:  Want to grab a drink?

 Obiwan:  Sure.

 Together they leave Anakin in the sleeping compartment and move out into a long corridor running the length of the ship.  Toward the far end there is a large room with a bar serving drinks and food.  They find seats at the bar and order drinks from a server droid.

 Obiwan:  So who's this mysterious friend were meeting?

 Padme:  Oh he’s an old associate of mine...

 Obiwan:  Associate?

 Padme:  ....Business...associate.

 Obiwan:  (Sipping his drink)  I see

 Padme:  His name is Saw, he’s got connections to some of the deeper scenes on Onderon.

 Obiwan:  Ok, he’s some kind of smuggler or something?

 Padme:  You could say that.

 Obiwan:  Aha.

 Padme:  Don't worry!  You're always so uptight, it’s just a party, it’s the outer rim!  Of course all kinds of people will be there.

 Obiwan:  I know, sorry, I guess i'm just feeling unsure about things right now, i feel pulled between two worlds.

 Padme:  Ya I understand that, I guess I know which world I belong to.

 Obiwan:  So does Anakin.  I'm the one who's lost somewhere in the middle.

 Padme:  It's better than being on the side of relentless law and order!

 Obiwan:  You really see yourself on the opposite side as Anakin?

 Padme:  In some ways...Yes.  I love him of course, both of you have been my best friends since childhood, but, with the war and everything.....some lines seem more clearly drawn than they did before.

 They sit in silence for a moment, Obiwan is pensive.

 Obiwan:  He is right about some things, we need the Republic and the Jedi to keep peace in the Galaxy, I know it seems abstract at times and the Republic isn't always on the right side of things.  But there are larger principles at stake.

 Padme:  The way I see it, principal is an abstraction, the only reality is on the ground, and on the ground the Republic is generally on the wrong side of things.

 Obiwan:  It's true, but you have to acknowledge the importance of an ideal, sometimes an ideal can be worth sacrificing for.

 Padme:  Well, I wouldn't deny that, perhaps we simply differ in our vision of the true ideal.  You see the state and order as the ideal.  I see freedom.

 Obiwan:  That's a real simplification of my viewpoint, I don't see the state as an ideal outside the power of democracy!  

 Padme:  Democracy is still the state!  Especially in the Republic!

 Obiwan:  It's true, I also never claimed the Republic was ideal, it's very flawed, but it has certain standards.

 Padme:  Ya standard repression.

 Obiwan:  Ok, ok, look, were not going to agree on this!  Why don't we go try and get some rest!  

 Padme:  Ok

 They finish their drinks and head back to the sleeping room.

 Scene changes, in orbit of a blue green planet, presently the transport ship jumps in from hyperspace.  It heads down and enters the atmosphere.  Scene cuts to overlooking a city, surrounded by thick jungle as far as the eye can see.  The ship flies over and camera follows it as it lands on a platform, a ramp extends and passengers emerge, finally Obiwan, Padme and Anakin step out onto the platform.

 Anakin:  (Stretching)  Ahh, this is great, feel that temperature!

 Padme:  Ya this place is awesome!  Come on, my friend is waiting for us at the terminal!

 They follow Padme who leads them down a set of stairs and into a building where groups of people are coming and going to different platforms.  Saw stands surveying the crowd.  He spots Padme and with a smile comes walking over.

 Saw:  Padme!  I'm so glad you made it!

 They embrace as Anakin and Obiwan look on.

 Padme:  Saw, these are the friends I was telling you about, Obiwan Kenobi and Anakin Skywalker.

 Saw turns and shakes each of their hands.

 Saw:  Ahh, the esteemed Jedi Masters themselves!

 Anakin turns a bit red and Padme laughs.

 Padme:  Oh Anakin's no master!

 Saw:  Oh, excuse me.

 Anakin:  (laughing)  Oh it’s nothing!

 Saw:  Well, glad to meet both of you!  I managed to get some sweet accommodations for you, should be up to Coruscant standards.  Come on this way!

 Obiwan and Anakin exchange bemused looks and follow Saw out of the terminal and down a busy street, they take a few turns and finally reach a suburban area with small but fancy houses.

 Saw:  That ones all yours.

 Padme:  (Looking at him in surprise)  Really?

 Saw:  Yup.  There’s a flush of housing right now and we were able to get this one at an extremely competitive price!

 Padme:  Great!

 They walk forward and Saw enters a security code on the door panel.  The door slides open with a whoosh, revealing a nicely furnished apartment.  

 Saw:  Bedrooms, bathroom, kitchen, food has been provided for the weekend.  The gathering starts tomorrow, you can make yourselves at home here and in the city until then.

 Padme:  Thanks Saw, i’m so glad you invited us.

 Saw:  Of course, it's been to long.  Say, can I speak with you in private for a few moments Padme?

 Padme:  Sure!  (Turning to Obiwan and Anakin)  One minute!

 Obiwan and Anakin nod and exchange wary glances.  Saw and Padme step outside and walk down the street.

 Saw:  Are you sure about those two?  You know what’s about to happen here.

 Padme:  I'm sure.  Look, were going to need all the help we can get.

 Saw:  I was skeptical when you said Jedi Knights, and now that I see them they seem like total strait arrows.

 Padme:  Trust me, they both have seen the Republic at its worst, there’s a lot more than meets the eye with those two.

 Saw:  Ok, I trust you, but were gambling a lot on this.

 Padme:  (Putting her hand on his shoulder)  It will be fine.

 Saw:  (Smiling)  Ya, your right.  I'm just letting nerves get to me.

 Padme:  Its ok, we're all nervous.

 Saw:  Look, send me a message if you need anything.  I'll be around later, we can have dinner the four of us!  Get to know each other better before tomorrow.

 Padme:  Sounds good.  Take care.

 Saw:  You to.

 Padme turns and walks back the way she came.

 Scene cuts back to the apartment where Anakin and Obiwan are waiting.  

 Obiwan:  I don't like it.  There’s more going on here than we've been told.

 Anakin:  Ya, i agree.  I'm not sure what though.  I still trust Padme.

 Obiwan:  So do I, but her priorities aren't what they used to be before the war.

 Anakin:  Well..who's are?

 Obiwan:  True, but I wonder what they could be up to?

 Anakin:  It will be fine!  We can just keep out of whatever it is, at worst it will be entertaining!

 Obiwan:  True, your probably right.

 Anakin:  Oh i definitely am.

 Obiwan:  (Laughing)  Ok, ok, i need to lighten up.

 The door opens and Padme enters.

 Padme:  Hey.

 Obiwan:  Hey.

 Anakin:  Everything ok?

 Padme:  Ya, my friend just wanted me to assure him your cool.  This party might be kind of crazy and he just wanted to make sure your not a bunch of stiff do gooders.

 Anakin:  Definitely not!  You told him that right?

 Padme:  Of course!

 Obiwan:  Party will be crazy like how? 

 Padme:  Maybe a little hooliganism, probably some illegal drugs, maybe a bit of street protesting.

 Anakin:  Wait is this one of your schemes to get us involved in politics?

 Padme:  No!  Come on, you know my associates are all political!  Being my friend it comes with the territory!

 Anakin:  Ok ok!  I don't know why I imagined otherwise!

 Padme:  Look you guys, i invited you because I thought this would be fun and might provide an opportunity to let loose after being in the war.

 Obiwan:  Alright, sorry, i really am grateful you invited us.

 Anakin:  Me to.

 Padme:  (Smiling)  Thanks, just try and have fun ok?

 Obiwan:  Ok.

 Anakin:  You know it!

 Scene changes, it is the same apartment but later in the day.  Presently the doorbell buzzes.  Padme steps forward and opens it.  Saw stands in the entryway.

 Padme:  You made it!

 Saw:  Sorry I got waylaid on my way here.  

 Padme:  No problem, we just had dinner prepared.

 Saw enters and they go into the kitchen where a table for four is set, Anakin and Obiwan already sitting.  

 Obiwan:  Welcome!

 Saw:  Thank you!

 Anakin:  This is some high level hospitality!  To tell you the truth it’s a bit better than most Coruscant apartments these days.

 Saw:  It's the least we could do!

 Saw and Padme sit and they eat for a few moments.

 Obiwan:  So...Saw, what kind of party is this?  Padme isn’t giving us much to go on.

 Saw:  It’s an independence celebration Onderon holds every year to commemorate our struggle for freedom.  We have street parades across the whole city, the party lasts for two days!

 Anakin:  Wow!  Sounds great!

 Padme:  It is, I promise I didn’t bring you here for nothing!

 Obiwan:  So...tell us a bit about Onderon, there isn’t much in the archives.

 Saw:  Ya, that doesn’t surprise me much, the Republic only holds a few garrisons on the whole planet.  They don’t get a whole lot of on the ground information out of this place.  People are very hostile to any Republic presence.

 Obiwan:  Is that so?  Why?

 Saw:  Well, there hasn’t been a year that’s passed that some kind of black operation hasn’t happened here, sometimes it’s mass kidnappings or bombings, shooting, ect.  The scale and sophistication is always way beyond any of the local groups and the targets are always...well...very civilian.  So the old wars never really ended for us and after the clone wars started we have been under constant attack, even though Onderon never officially sided with the resistance!

 Obiwan:  I see…

 Anakin:  (Upset)That doesn't make sense, you don’t know for sure those attacks were carried out by the Republic!

 Saw:  Oh we do.  We have mountains of evidence.  Shell casings, discarded weapons and even captured Republic operatives on several occasions.  We also have massive troves of Republic documents that show conclusively the systematic nature of the campaign against us.

 Anakin: ...ok...can I see?  I’m sorry to ask something like that...but, it’s important to me...if the Republic really is doing something like this...well...then I have to rethink my position on some issues.

 Saw:  (Nodding)  Of course, I can bring them up on this terminal.

 The pulls a screen from a cabinet in the room and presses a few buttons, then hands it to Anakin.  He sits reading it with a concerned look.

 Obiwan:  I believe you...when I was in the military...I participated in...no..commanded many operations like that.  I can tell you that at the highest levels it was standard policy to target any system deemed a threat to the Republic...whether or not they had officially joined the rebellion.  

 Anakin:  But targeting civilians in a systematic manner?  Death squads, terrorism?  Mass kidnapping and murder?  We didn’t do that, we fought with honor!

 Obiwan:  Anakin….there we’re, things you didn’t see in the regular course of the war.  A group of senior Generals, myself included, we’re given secret orders to carry out the war in an...extralegal fashion.  Many of our missions...involved the type of things Saw is describing.

 Everyone is silent.  Anakin’s face has turned pale, Padme and Saw exchange concerned looks.

 Anakin:  I….I can’t believe it….

 Obiwan:  I’m sorry my friends, that you had to find out this way.  But...It’s better you know the truth than keep pretending the lie.  We...can’t discuss this when we are back in the Republic, we could all be imprisoned for leaking classified information.

 Saw:  (Nodding)  Thank you….it means a great deal that you were willing to back up my story...I won’t breathe a word of what you told me.

 Obiwan:  Thank you.

 Anakin:  But...why?  Why would they do this?  I don’t understand how you could murder innocent people in the fight for justice?  

 Saw:  The Republic doesn’t fight for justice, it fights for survival...and conquest.

 Anakin:  That’s not true, you may be right about some black operations, but the Republic is a force for good in the Galaxy….Democracy is worth fighting for.

 Padme:  Democracy is only a word when you are under military occupation.

 They sit silently for a few moments, 

 Saw:  Let’s not get to tense...here...drinks all around!

 He stands and opens a cabinet, producing a bottle of clear liquor and some glasses, he pours them each shots and they drink together.

 Obiwan:  What time do the festivities start?

 Saw:  Early in the morning, it should ramp up all day.

 Obiwan:  Great!  (He pours another round of shots and they toast)  Sound like this will be a time to remember….

 Scene cuts, it is early in the morning in the city, the sun shines, birds are chirping, people are going about regular morning tasks but there is an air of excitement about the city, you see decorations being prepared and supplies corralled, children already run about in excitement, obviously out of their regular school for the festival.  Presently you see Obiwan, Anakin and Padme walking down the street, they survey the scene and seem uplifted by it.

 Padme:  Oh...this is exciting...look at the all the food!

 She stares in envy at a number of booths where massive quantities of delicious looking food is being prepared.

 They continue down the road and come to a quieter area with a wide canal, there are small barges and river boats moving lazily along the water.  They stop and look out over the scene.

 Padme:  It sure is beautiful here…

 Anakin:  Ya...look...i’m sorry I freaked out a bit last night...I...i’m really grateful you invited me.. It seems like this is going to be really fun, I just wanted you to know...I’m sorry..don’t hold it against me!

 Padme:  (Smiling)  It’s ok, I understand.

 Anakin:  Thanks.  (He blushes slightly and looks away)

 Obiwan:  Hey, we should check out the garden districts like Saw was saying, i think they are just down this way…

 Padme:  Ok!  Let’s do it!

 They head off and you see them walking down a street with massive colorful gardens and hanging canopy trees.  Scene cuts, you see the sun is lower in the sky, it is now late afternoon, you see the three coming toward the inner city where the festival is getting into full swing.  People are dancing in the street and there are various musical events going on throughout.  They join in and you see them drinking and socializing with other party goers.  Presently you see Saw make his way through the crowd and join them.

 Padme:  Hey!

 Saw:  Hey, enjoying yourselves?

 Anakin:  Ya, this is great, I’m really glad we came!

 Padme:  I told you!

 Saw:  And, the parade is about to start!

 Anakin:  Parade?

 Padme:  Ya, it’s crazy, maybe not as fancy and epic as your military parade back on Coruscant, but it’s got spirit!

 Obiwan:  I can’t wait!

 As if in answer to their words, you hear a loud rhythmic music start, it get louder and louder, people clear the streets and crowd along the side walks in anticipation.  You see a group of people heading down the roadway, they are dressed in costumes and masks, they carry flags and long wooden poles, some have drums and other instruments, there is dancing and marching.  It is jovial but there is an air of seriousness to the march, a reminder of the warriors who died for Onderons independence from the Republic.  Everyone watches in awe at the spectacle.  The march is massive, it continues for several minutes, you see people are lighting torches and the daylight is quickly fading.  The end of the procession is near and the crowds of people watching surge along after them, an incredible crowd has gathered in a city square, spilling out into various streets and alleys.  You see Saw lean over to Padme and whisper something into her ear.  She turns to Anakin and Obiwan.

 Padme:  Hey, I need to talk to Saw real quick, I’ll be right back!

 Anakin and Obiwan exchange puzzled looks. 

 Anakin:  Don’t be gone long!

 Padme:  Don’t worry, I won’t leave you hanging! 

 She and Saw hurry off through the crowd, camera stays with them and focuses up close so you hear their conversation.

 Padme:  Everything is ready?

 Saw:  Yup, good to go!

 He passes her a bundle of cloth, she unwraps part of it and you see a blaster, then she tucks it away.

 Padme:  Ok...good luck.

 Saw:  (Turning to her with an ironic smile)  May the force be with you!

 Padme looks at him with affection, then turns and they continue forward, camera backs out and you see one hundred or so of the marchers following Saw and Padme.  Scene cuts to a street, you see Saw and Padme walking toward the camera, behind them are a crowd of obviously armed revolutionaries, scene is slow with dramatic music.  

 Scene cuts, you see stormtroopers guarding the gate of a large ominous looking building.  The scene cuts again, this time you see Saw, Padme and the others lying about in prone positions two blocks away from the gate, they have blasters drawn and a tense look in their eyes.

 Rebel:  Alright, this is the garrison, looks like they have doubled the guard for festival night, wise…

 Saw:  But ultimately useless!  Spread the word, when I give the war cry, attack without relent!

 The rebel nods and turns.  Saw looks at Padme.

 Saw:  Hey...I’m really glad you’re here..by my side..at the moment of battle..

 Padme:  (Smiling)  Me to...I…

 She turns away, obviously with intense feelings but unable to express them.  Suddenly the rebel returns and breaks the moment.

 Rebel:  The word is spread, when your ready.

 Saw:  (Nodding)  Ok, here we go…

 He leans back his head and letting his blaster fall on its strap to his side, cups his hands and gives an animalistic bellow, it is part howl and part savage roar, part cry of pain and part snarl of vengeance.  Padme looks at Saw in wonder.  Then they charge, echoing his cry in a thunder of rage.  Blasters bark with orange fire and smoke, the guards fall like wheat before the scythe.  The rebels storm forward and take up position before the gate.  Two technicians run forward and wire a large explosive to the gate, returning to cover the gate is blown open in a massive boom and flash, its doors hang awkwardly blasted and twisted away on the remains of their hinges.  

 The rebels charge forward and are met with heavy fire, but they press on, some falling and other taking up positions behind cover.  You see Saw and Padme in the thick of the action, leading at the front, pushing on and rallying their comrades when the assault slows.  You see storm troopers falling and the main doors of the building are breached.  Rebels pour in, troopers falling before them, the fighting is intense, the corridors fill with smoke.

 Once inside, you see the building is a prison.  The rebels are freeing prisoners, many of them are children, the cells are small dark and cramped, obviously a hellscape.  You see rebels burst into torture chambers, unoccupied, but the ghosts of their victims hang heavy over the rooms.  The prison is broken open, you see the rebels victorious, masses of prisoners burst out of the doors and make their way to freedom.  

 Scene cuts, it is back to the celebration, you see obvious commotion as the prisoners are arriving and people realize their loved ones have escaped from prison.  Shot cuts to Anakin and Obiwan, they can see the changing mood of the crowd but can’t tell what is happening.

 Anakin:  What’s going on now?  

 Obiwan:  No idea…

 Padem abruptly appears at their side, she looks dazed but ecstatic.

 Padme:  Hey guys…

 Obiwan:  Hey…

 Anakin:  Hey..what’s going on?  Where were you?

 Padme:  Well...we...kind of broke open a Republic prison.

 Anakin:  You what?

 Padme:  Don’t be mad, it was full of children and there were torture chambers and...well, I don’t want to even say!  I’m sorry I didn’t tell you, but...I had to, I felt I had no choice!  When I served here in the war, I met so many good people whose lives were destroyed by the Republic, when Saw told me what they were planning...I had to help.  I’m sorry I brought you into this.

 Anakin:  Me to...but...It’s done.  To be honest, I actually think what you did was incredibly brave.  Prison is disgusting...worse than death…

 Obiwan:  I agree...I still think you should have told us.

 Padme:  I am sorry about that...I just..needed to make sure this happened, couldn’t risk it.

 Obiwan:  (Sighing)  I understand…

 Without warning there is a blaster shot somewhere in the crowd, people scream and start running, then more shots ring out, the fire can be seen in the distance.

 Padme:  Let’s get out of here!

 They start running with the crowd, behind them you see storm troopers with blasters leveled ruthlessly gunning down anyone in front of them.  They run down a side street and suddenly there are troopers in front of them.  Instead of shooting the simply hold the position and you see troopers closing in behind, they are trapped.  You see them one by one being arrested, then Padme, Obiwan and Anakin.

 Scene cuts to a prison cell, it is full of thirty or so people arrested during the protest, you see Anakin, Padme and Obiwan sitting dejectedly with their backs against the wall..

 Obiwan:  Wow...i never expected...we would end up here….

 Anakin:  Our careers are over….

 Padme:  That’s the least of our worries, are you crazy?

 Anaking:  (Silent for a moment)  I...don’t think I’m going to get in trouble for this, just to be honest, neither is Obiwan…

Obiwan:  I’m afraid he’s right...the council might strip us of our ranks, but we won’t be charged, no one in the councils favor ever is, we know to much.  No, Anakin and I will be shuffled off stage, given estates and accounts on some rim world, kept quiet and out of sight...

 Padme:  (Angry)  I can’t believe this, the privilege!

 Anakin:  (Looking sad)  Padme...I’m really sorry, I feel terrible about what might happen to you.

 Padme:  Well, it doesn’t really help me.

 Anakin:  I...I..don’t know what to say.

 Padme:  (Looking away)  Maybe try not saying anything for a minute.

 They sit together in silence, you see Anakin take on a resolute look.  Suddenly he stands.

 Padme:  What are you doing?

 He doesn’t answer, instead he steps forward and looks through the bars of the cell.

 Anakin:  Hey, you there, guard!  (He moves his hand slightly)  I need to get out of this cell.

 You see the guard walk forward, he looks at Anakin and stares him in the eye, entranced.

 Guard:  You..need to get out of this cell…

 Anakin:  You’re going to open this door…

 Guard:  I’m going to open this door…

 He reaches forward and unlocks the door, it slides open with a whir.  Not waiting Anakin punches the man square in the face, he falls back against the wall and crumples.  Anakin turns back to Padme, Obiwan and the other prisoners.

 Anakin:  Well..come on!

 Broken from their trance they rush forward, Anakin takes a blaster from the fallen guard.  The group rushes forward and you see them storm a guard room and blast down a few troopers.  Then they burst out of the prison and escape into the night, you see Anakin, Padme and Obiwan running full out away from the prison.

 Scene cuts, you see Obiwan, Anakin and Padme reach the apartment Saw left them.  You can still hear chaos and fighting in the distance.  Scene cuts to inside the house, the three settle in, pouring drinks and eating food prepared by the server droid.  

 Padme:  (Looking at Anakin)  Thank you, thank you for doing that, I was wrong to judge you…

 Anakin:  (Blushing)  It was nothing!  You know I would never let anything happen to you!

 Padme:  (Smiling)  I believe it now!

 Obiwan:  (Yawning)  I need sleep, I’ll see you all in the morning.

 Padme/Anakin:  Goodnight.

 Obiwan leaves.

 Padme:  (Lifting bottle)  Another drink?

 Anakin:  Sure.

 She pours a drink for him and then one for herself.

 Anakin:  Padme, I..just wanted to say… you really helped me understand something today, about my privilege, but also how important it is to do what you can to help others in need...I felt..I’ve never met anyone like you before…

 He turns away blushing now...Padme is smiling and also blushes.

 Padme:  I’m glad to hear you say that...I’ve never met anyone like you either…

 Their eyes meet, Anakin looks down at Padme’s lips for a moment, then back into her eyes.  Padme leans forward and kisses him, they embrace and kiss passionately, moving down to lie on the couch.

 Scene cuts, it is morning.  You see Padme, Anakin, Saw and Obiwan standing together in front of a transport ship with its ramp extended, people are boarding the ship.

 Saw:  I wish you could stay longer.  Thank you for everything and it was great meeting the two of you!

 Anakin:  You as well.

 Obiwan:  We will visit as soon as time permits!

 Saw:  Please!  You will always be welcome.

 Padme:  Goodbye Saw, thank you for everything.  (They embrace)

 Saw:  Until next time.

 The three move off and walk up the ramp, Saw watches.

 Scene cuts to orbit, you see the transport ship fly into space and then jump into hyperspace.

ACT II

Scene is inside a Republic Federal Building, various government employees are going about duties, coming in and out of offices.  A mail delivery bot enters and delivers a package to the front desk, you see security sending the package through a scanner and then giving the droid a thumb print.  It leaves.  
Presently Obi Wan emerge from one of the doors, it slides shut behind him.  He has a serious tired look in his eyes, he makes his way toward the entrance, the guard nods at him.

 Guard:  Did they grill you good?

 Obiwan:  Not to bad, just wanted to know every little detail about Onderon.

 Guard:  (Laughing)  Not surprising all things considered.  Have a good afternoon Master Kenobi.

 Obiwan:  May the force be with you.

 An explosion tears through the building, emanating from one of the offices on the far side, Obiwan and the guard are thrown to the ground, people are screaming and smoke fills the air.  Scene cuts to outside the building where there is chaos, you see the delivery droid stop and observe the burning building behind him before moving on.

 Scene cuts, it is a dark room, you can see a shadowy figure working at a terminal, but not his face.  He plugs a cable and pushes a few buttons, the screen jumps to life.  Scene cuts to shots of screens around the Republic cutting out to static, then, they all change to the image of a sinister looking alien, red and black striped skin accents a ring of horns circling his bald head.  He has a look of cool, assured malice.  

 Maul:  Greetings, citizens of the Galactic Republic.  My name is Maul.  I want to publicly claim responsibility for the wave of bombings yesterday which claimed so many innocent lives...or so it would seem.  (Suddenly in full Wrath)  Yet, I proclaim you, everyone of you!  Guilty!  It is you, in your way of life, who have fired the first shots of this war one hundred times over!  I simply return a tiny sample of what your precious Republic unleashes on the Galaxy every day.  This message is not a demand.  It is not a rallying call, or propaganda or even a threat.  It is simply a statement of fact.  I will destroy the Republic and everything it stands for.  I will usher in a new era of freedom where there is no state, no democracy, no army or police, no money or prison.  Nothing but what we build...together!  Even if I die, others will go on, and others!  And one day, the Republic will be swept away in a pure fire of vengeful hearts!  Now go!  Enjoy what time you have while you can, just remember, I’m coming…

 The screens go black.  Scene changes, it is a street on Coruscant, you see Anakin and Padme standing outside a large building, presently, Obiwan exits and makes his way down to them.

Padme:  Are you ok?

Obiwan:  Just a little shaken up, that's all.

Anakin:  You were right there...at the scene of the attack!

Obiwan:  I didn't see anything, just an explosion.

They start walking down the street together.

Anakin:  It's not going to take them long to track down the terrorists!  The council has already summoned me!

Obiwan:  Be careful not to play the councils power games, Anakin.  You don't want to become their pawn.

Anakin:  I think I can handle the council!  All I want is to do my part in tracking down that scum Maul...when I get my hands on him...

Padme:  Anakin, you're letting your hatred get out of control....it's dangerous...we're Jedi not soldiers.

Anakin:  We're Jedi AND soldiers....

Padme:  Just...please...don't do anything crazy.....I don't want to see you get hurt.

Anakin:  (Laughing dismissively)  Maul is the one who is going to get hurt!

Padme:  Just..(She turns away obviously in turmoil)  be careful....

Anakin:  I will...it's a promise.

They continue walking down the street.  Scene changes, Anakin stands before the council.

 Oran:  In response to the crisis the council have decided to grant you the honorary rank of "Jedi Master" for as long as it is deemed necessary.  We would not dishonor our greatest warrior and general by leaving him trapped at the lowly rank of "knight".  

 Anakin:  I accept.  (Down on one knee and bowing head)  I will do what i must.

 Oran steps forward and draws a lightsaber, flicking it on the blue white blade pops into existence.

 Oran:  I hereby grant you the rank of Master

 He moves the light saber over one shoulder then the other, then steps back in switches it off.

 Oran:  Rise, Master Skywalker.

 Anakin stands, a hard and powerful look in his eye.

 Oran:  Now, what will you do with your new rank?

 Anakin:  I will defend the Republic!

 Oran:  Good, now go forth, find the mass murdering terrorists, bring them to justice!  The Chancellor has been granted sweeping emergency powers, the entire fleet and infantry core is at your disposal.  Avenge the Republic!

 Anakin:  (Bowing Slightly)  Yes Master

 Turning dramatically he strides out of the chamber.  The council sits satisfied.

 Scene change, it is a rough part of Coruscant, a man stands in a back Alley, he has a hood pulled closely over his face and seems nervous.  Presently, Padme appears and seeing him, moves quickly forward, they embrace.  The man pulls his hood back, it is Saw Gerrera.

 Saw:  Padme, you made it.

 Padme:  I came as quickly as I could.

 Saw:  Listen, this place is no longer safe for you or any of us, anyone who might be connected with our coalition.  You have to come with me.

 Padme:  I...I can't...I have to try and help my friends.

 Saw:  It's too late, you must know that, you must sense it!  Your destiny lies on a different path from them.

 Padme:  I...I know.  Alright, I'll go to Onderon with you.

 Saw:  We're not going to Onderon.  It's been occupied by the Republic.

 Padme:  Oh?  Then where?

 A ship, in deep space, we will be safe there, and there are people I want you to meet.

 Padme:  Ok, how long is the trip?  

 Saw:  Several days.  You should pack well, i’ll meet you back here in a few hours ok?  

 Padme:  Ok, I'll see you soon.

 They embrace and Padme hurry's off.

 Scene Change, Space, a blue/brown/green planet is in the background, presently Obi Wan’s starfighter flies from the foreground descending toward the planet.  Cut to ship landing on the ground, it is a hilly terrain with short grass and mountains in the background.  The door opens and Obi wan steps out, he pulls his hood over his head and walks toward a small village in the distance.

 Reaching the village you see it is a small pastoral community, the people watch him with curiosity but don’t speak, Obi Wan approaches a man.

 Obi Wan:  Excuse me, i'm seeking Master Yoda.

 The man wordlessly points to a hut and then goes back to his work.  Obi Wan walks to the doorway and pulls back the flap, inside it is spacious and comfortable, Yoda sits at the far side on a pillow, attending to a small soup pot on a fire.

 Yoda:  Mmm, master Kenobi, been expecting you i have 

 Obi Wan:  Master, you always said i should come find you in times of need.

 Yoda:  Hmm, yes, and great need i sense you have.  

 Obi Wan:  War is brewing in the Republic, the council is corrupt and power hungry, the Senate is ineffective and now Anakin has gone mad with power on a crusade to hunt down the terrorists.

 Yoda:  Strayed from the path your young apprentice has.

 Obi Wan:  I fear he is in greater danger than he realizes.

 Yoda:  Tempted by the dark side he will be.

 Obi Wan:  By Maul?

 Yoda:  By his own ego will he be tempted.

 Obi Wan:  Why?  Because he’s using violence to fight the dark side?

 Yoda:  Fight, the light side does not.  Endure, illuminate, sooth, but never attack, or conquer.  

 Obi Wan:  So Anakin is doomed!

 Yoda:  (Matter of fact) Doomed are we all.

 Obi Wan:  Then I fear for my Republic!

 Yoda:  A Republic, have not, and fear no longer will you.

 Obi Wan is silent, obviously in turmoil.

 Obi Wan:  As always, you speak in axioms and half riddles, i should not have come here expecting closure.

 Yoda:  Came here for the truth did you!

 Obi Wan:  I suppose, maybe i'm getting old and i just can't handle harsh realities anymore.

 Yoda:  Yet, came you did

 Obi Wan:  Yes, i can't abandon my friends, i had to try.

 Yoda:  But abandoned your friends, you have.

 Obiwan:  How?  I’m trying to help them stop Maul and fix everything!

 Yoda:  If Maul is destroyed, so to will be your friends.

 Obi Wan: How can that be?

 Yoda:  Bound together your destinies have become, impossible will you find it to separate them. 

 Obi Wan:  Then how can we stop Maul? 

 Yoda:  Your destiny, to stop him, it is not.  Succeed he will.

 Obi Wan is silent.

 Yoda:  Trained him, i did.

 Obi Wan:  (Stunned)  You trained him to murder all those people?

 Yoda:  No! Trained him to fight i did not.  Only in the ways of the light did i instruct him.

 Obiwan:  Then why is he on the dark side?

 Yoda:  On one side of the force he is not.  To his followers both disciplines he teaches, and neither he follows.

 Obi Wan:  I can't believe it.

 Yoda:  You will, you will.

 Scene cuts, it is space, you see a large cruiser in the background, presently a small shuttle jumps in from hyperspace.  Scene cuts to the cockpit, you see Saw at the controls and Padme sitting beside him.  There is a whir as the radio searches for a signal then you hear a voice.

 Radio:  Transport, this is the Centaur, state your identity and purpose.

 Saw:  This is transport echo 217, requesting permission to dock, code is Mystery three five alpha quicksand.

 Radio:  Acknowledged, docking approved.

 Saw looks at Padme and smiles.

 Saw:  Here we go!

 Scene cuts, you see Saw and Padme standing in front of a port, it slides open with a hiss, a few people, some human some aliens are standing on the other side in technicians jumpsuits.  Saw and Padme step forward.

 Saw:  Andrew!  Great to see you!

 He shakes hands with a man and then turns to one of the aliens.

 Saw:  Nolgor!  

 Nolgor:  Saw, welcome.

 Saw:  Everyone, this is my friend Padme, Padme, this is Andrew, Tessa, Nolgor, Galaran and Endar.  

 The group exchange greeting with Padme.

 Nolgor:  If you will come this way, he is expecting you.

 Saw and Padme exchange looks.

 Saw:  Very well.

 They follow the group down a corridor.  You see them arrive at a door, Nolgor presses a button, the door hisses open.  You see Maul sitting at the far end of a table.

 Padme:  You!

She turns to look at Saw in confusion, he puts a reassuring hand on her shoulder.

 Maul:  I would be honored if you would join us.

 Saw and Padme enter, the door closes behind them, leaving the three alone.

 Maul:  Welcome my friends, it is a pleasure to make your acquaintance… is it Padme?  

 Padme:  Yes..(Darkly)  And I know who you are….

 Maul:  (Amused)  Of course!

 They stand in silence for a moment.

 Maul:  So...to business, (He pours them both drinks.)

 Padme:  What is this?  Why did you bring me here Saw?

 Saw:  So that you could meet….my teacher.

 Padme:  You?

 Maul:  Yes, Saw never told you about our work together during the clone wars.

 Saw:  I’m sorry, it’s true, I meant to tell you, but, I figured the best way to explain would be for you to meet….him.

 Padme:  So...what’s so special about you...that all these people are willing to lay down their lives for you?  To kill all those people?  How can you justify it?

 Maul: (Matter of fact) I do not.  It is of course an atrocious act.

 They are silent.

 Padme:  Then...why?

 Maul:  Because...it must be done.  And if not me...then who?

 Padme:  But why?

 Maul:  For freedom!  For justice!  For chaos!  Many must stop breathing for others to live.  It is the way of things.

 Padme:  It isn’t right!

 Maul:  What is right?

 Padme:  I don’t know...helping people….

 Maul:  Am I not helping?  You simply disagree with my means…

 Padme:  Well, yes, i support your revolutionary ideals.  I also think we should fight when necessary, but for self defence!  Not this...killing of the innocent.  

 Maul:  You really still believe they are innocent don’t you, It’s beautiful, i won’t try to dissuade you of the notion, only think of this, there is an inevitability to this world, a weight and a momentum to things started and in motion.  One does not simply turn the tides of history, not without sacrifice!  Not without doing what others will not!  I do not see it as ideal, indeed, i believe in no ideal whatsoever.  Just….reality.  I will do what I must...and I will destroy my enemies….by whatever means necessary.

 They sit silent for a moment.

 Padme:  I...understand...I don’t agree, but...I understand.

 Maul nods.

 Maul:  Of course, I didn’t expect you to change your mind over dinner.

 They smile, breaking the tension.

 Maul:  You’re welcome to stay as long as you like, Saw and I have some business to attend to.

 Padme nods and  she and Saw share a look.

 Saw:  Our scouts have located a suitable planet to set up a base camp.  It’s an obscure system in the outer core, should provide a perfect base for any operations.

Maul:  Good, we can begin the work immediately.

 Saw nods and they sit for a moment in silence.

 Maul:  Things are going...exactly as planned.

 Scene changes, it is night, you see Obiwan sitting at a fire looking pensive, he is still on the planet in the pastoral village.  Presently you see Yoda appear out of the darkness behind him, his cane in hand. 

 Yoda:  Master Kenobi, come with me…

 Obiwan looks up in surprise, then turns and follows him.  Scene cuts, you see Yoda walking through the darkness, Obiwan following.

 Obiwan:  Where are we going.

 Yoda stops and slowly raises his arm and points.

 Yoda:  To the cave…..

 Obiwan peers through the darkness, you can see in the dim light the shadowy entrance of a cave on a hillside.

 Yoda:  Go inside...you must.

 Obiwan:  Alone?

 Yoda does not answer, but stands leaning on his cane.  Obiwan looks unsure.

 Obiwan:  Ok, here we go…

 He steps forward and turns on a small electric light, moving into the darkness he steps into the cave and starts working his way into its depths.  It is a wide and spacious tunnel, Obiwan moves deeper.

 Suddenly, A blue lightsaber beam erupts in the darkness, Obiwan falls back in shock, you see Anakin standing with saber in had, facing away from the camera.  Suddenly two red blades ignite, you see Maul standing in opposition.  The two fight with fury, sabers flying around them. 

 Obiwan watches for a moment before he runs forward and tries to separate the two.

 Obiwan:  Stop!

 Anakin pulls away from him and Maul, who is still grappling with Obiwan is unable to get his saber up in time, Anakin beheads him.  Obiwan steps back, facing Anakin, who stares him down with a hungry look.

 Obiwan:  Anakin….

 Anakin lunges forward, suddenly he has transformed into Maul, his red saber flashes, Obiwan throws up his hands defenseless but suddenly the image is gone...he is alone.

 Scene cuts, you see Yoda standing by the cave entrance.  Obiwan presently emerges.

 Obiwan:  What... was it?

 Yoda:  The future did you see.

 Obiwan:  The future?

 Yoda:  Beware always, vision of the future...treacherous can they be.

 Obiwan:  But how will I know what to do when the time is right?

 Yoda:  (Sinister)  You will know.

 Scene cuts, you see Chancellor Palpatine sitting at his desk in his office, presently the comm. buzzes and Palpatine presses the button.

 Palpatine:  Yes?  

 Radio:  General Skywalker has arrived.

 Palpatine:  Send him in.

 The door slides open a moment later and Anakin enters, he is wearing a Navy General’s uniform.  The Chancellor stands and shakes his hand.

 Palpatine:  Ah...good, I’m glad you could make it...I’ve been following your career with great interest, it’s an honor to finally meet you.  

 Anakin:  Thank you Chancellor, the council was most adamant that I should hear what you had to say.

 Palpatine:  For good reason.. (He sits and gestures at a seat in front of his desk but Anakin stands.)  I have a...unique perspective on these matters.

 Anakin:  Oh?  How so?

 Palpatine:  I am part of a long tradition of leadership in the Galactic Republic one which stretches back to its founding, however my familial lineage goes back far longer, to the time of the Old Coruscant Empire and the days of the great wars….

 He pauses for a moment but Anakin just watches him.

 Palpatine:  My family remembers a time...when Coruscant was strong, when we could defend ourselves from alien terrorists.  I’m trying to build something bigger than myself, I want to bring peace to the Galaxy and destroy the enemies of order.  I believe I can count on you to do what must be done to save civilization.  You have been given command of the Republic Navy, Now, go forth and destroy Maul. 

 Anakin:  I intend to sir.

 Palpatine:  Good.  Don’t stop until you have destroyed every last one of them.  This is the beginning of a new era, one in which the Jedi will be counted on more and more to bring security to the Republic.  We can no longer depend on the weak politicians, we must rely on the power of strong men to protect what is rightfully ours...from those who would take it.

 Anakin:  I understand.

 Palpatine:  Good, you are dismissed.

 Anakin bows and leaves, the Chancellor looks satisfied.

 Scene cuts, you see a camp of prefab structures in a deep shadowy forest, throughout you see people going about various tasks, they are obviously Maul’s followers.  Scene cuts to orbit of the blue green planet, their is a destroyer of alien design in orbit, it is Mauls ship. Suddenly three Star Destroyers jump into orbit.  Scene cuts to the bridge of one of the ships, you see Anakin standing, a navy uniform on under his Jedi cloak, a dark look in his eye.

 Anakin:  Captain Rainar, capture that ship.

 Radio:  Yes General.

 Anakin:  Commander, begin landing.

 Officer:  Yes sir!

 Scene cuts back to orbit, you see one of the Destroyers closing in on the smaller destroyer, they exchange fire but the smaller one is disabled and floats adrift.  You see another destroy descending into orbit.

 Scene cuts, it is the planet, camera pans across horizon and you see three AT-AT’s approaching a thick forest.  Scene cuts to one of the walkers bridge.  You see Anakin standing behind the pilot.

 Pilot:  Sir, we won’t get far through that forest.

 Anakin:  It’s no problem, the enemy base is just ahead.  (Into radio)  Deploy ground troops!  

 Scene cuts to forest, you see hundreds of storm troopers working their way through the thick old growth trees.  Anakin is in their midst, striding with a furious look in his eyes.  You see them reach the prefab structures, the base is huge and the troops start fanning out through it, but no one is seen.  Suddenly, blaster fire erupts from every direction, there are snipers everywhere, the troopers drop like flies.  You see Anakin running into battle, his cloak thrown aside and his saber glowing a white blue fire.  He blocks shots, returning them to strike their shooter, cutting down any rebel in his path.  

 You see a group of troopers behind Anakin moving ahead, suddenly a shadowy figure leaps forth, black cloak unfurled behind him, his red and black striped head clearly visible.  He ignites a dual bladed red lightsaber and cuts down the group of troopers in a single spinning maneuver, then he leaps away and is gone.  Anakin gapes in fury, then tears after him.

 Putting away his lightsaber, he pulls a blaster and starts gunning down rebels, he moves ahead, what’s left of his troops falling far behind him, suddenly a blaster shot whizzes past his shoulder, he dives for cover and then tries to see where the shot came from, but there is nothing, he crouches behind a tree glancing around, you hear distant shots and fighting but it is quiet, then another shot tears through the silence and nearly hits Anakin, in response he leaps out and fires a series of pot shots, then dives for cover again as another shot nearly hits him.  

 Anakin begins moving up, crawling on his belly from cover to cover, each time narrowly avoiding shots, finally, he leaps up and fires a series of shots, running forward he closes in on the attacker, you see Maul sitting with a blaster rifle, he ducks the onslaught of blaster bolts and then tosses away his rife, pulling his saber out and igniting the dual blades.

 Maul leaps forward, blocking Anakin’s shots, Anakin throws down the blaster and draws his blue saber, he leaps forward and attacks Maul with his whole weight.  Maul is quick and counters with a turning back strike from his other blade, Anakin blocks just in time and the two dual ferociously, the fight grows more desperate. 

 Anakin cuts Maul’s saber in half, one side flickers and dies, Maul throws it aside and presses the attack. Anakin falters and Maul seizes the moment to slice his left arm off at the elbow, Anakin drops his lightsaber and cries out in pain.  Maul charges forward and swings for the death blow, but Anakin recovers and intercepts him, dodging the lightsaber he tackles Maul with his weight and catches his throat with his remaining arm.

 The two wrestle and Anakin stays on top of the smaller Maul, choking him.  You see Maul laughing at Anakin even as he dies.  Anakin falls down exhausted, he is clearly broken.

 Scene cuts, you see Anakin walking back toward his troops cradling the stump of his arm.  You see only a handful of troops picking through the remains of the battlefield which is littered with his fallen storm troopers.  Anakin is furious with rage and pain, you see him walk back toward the AT-AT’s with several of his troops.

ACT III

Scene cuts, you see a hospital room on Coruscant, Anakin lies unconscious in a bed, medical robots around him, they are working on a replacement robotic arm.  Padme and Obiwan stand by his bedside.

 Padme:  He looks terrible.

 Obiwan:  He’s lucky to be alive.

 They are silent for a moment.

 Padme:  Let’s...let’s go..somewhere else.  I can’t keep...watching him.

 Obiwan nods and they leave, Scene cuts to the two of them walking down a quiet back street on Coruscant.

 Padme:  I just...can’t believe he did that…

 Obiwan:  He’s taken the security of the Republic to heart, that’s for sure.

 Padme:  It’s more than that...ever since the attacks he’s been...fanatical.

 Obiwan:  It’s been hard on everyone…

 Padme:  Just when I thought he was going to change……..this had to come along…...and ruin everything…... (You can see her tearing up slightly)

 Obiwan stops and grabs her hand.

 Obiwan:  Padme, what is it?

 Padme:  (Wiping her eyes.)  Oh...it’s..nothing……...just...I’m pregnant.

 Obiwan:  (Looking at her in surprise)  Oh?  Who is the father?

 Padme:  (Emotional)  Who do you think?

 Obiwan:  Anakin….

 They are silent for a moment.

 Obiwan:  Padme….I’m sorry.

 Padme:  Don’t be...I was actually happy, and then...this...I don’t know what to think.  He’s scaring me Obiwan.

 They are silent for a moment.

 Obiwan:  We will get through this, I promise.  I’ll be here by your side whatever happens.  And I know Anakin will be a great father.  We’ve all been best friends since childhood, I’m sure this darkness will pass.

 Padme:  (Smiling)  Thank you.

 They hug.

 Padme:  Let’s go somewhere, maybe get something to eat.

 Obiwan nods and the continue walking.  Scene changes,  it is a fancy apartment on Coruscant, you see Padme looking out a window with a worried look on her face.  The door opens, you see Anakin enter, his arm has been replaced with a robotic one indistinguishable from the real.  Padme turns and goes toward him.

 Anakin:  Hey..

 Padme:  Hey...you ok?

 Anakin:  Never been better!

 Padme smiles then looks sad, she falters for a moment and then moves forward and hugs him tightly.

 Padme:  I was so worried.

 Anakin:  I’m sorry, I never meant to cause you pain.

 Padme:  I know...you only did...what you had to.

 They move together to the couch and sit.

 Padme:  Anakin...I...there...is something I have to tell you…

 She falters and looks down for a moment, Anakin watches her calmly.

 Padme:  Anakin...I’m pregnant.

 Slight surprise shows on his face and then realization.

Anakin:  That...that’s so wonderful!  I...I’m so happy.

 Padme smiles, despite the worry and fear still clearly present.

 Anakin:  We’re...we’re going to have a family!  

 Padme smiles and they hug.  

 Anakin:  I love you.

 Padme:  ……….I love you to…

 They kiss.

 Scene changes, you see Chancellor Palpatine sitting at his desk, presently the door opens and Anakin enters.

 Palpatine:  Ahh...General.  Welcome, welcome.  I wished to personally commend your heroic efforts on behalf of the Republic.  I also wanted to personally tell you...the council has seen fit to award you the honor of the Golden Circle. The Ceremony is being scheduled for tomorrow morning.

 Anakin nods, a slight shadow of the past flicks across his face, then it is gone.

 Anakin:  Thank you Chancellor, i live to serve my Republic.

 Palpatine:  Good, and you will be richly rewarded.  Because of your exemplary service, I have deemed it fit that you remain in command of the Navy...who better than you to lead our forces in this hour of need.  (Anakin nods again, seeming in a way not to absorb the words.)  There is still danger to the Republic.  We must be vigilant, even among our own ranks, anyone, even those who don’t realize they have become unwitting terrorist agents..could be a danger.  We must root them out!

 Anakin:  (Eyes narrowing)  I will destroy the enemies of the Republic!

 Palpatine:  (Looking pleased)  I know you will Master Skywalker, I know you will.

 Scene changes, it is a control room, you see Republic officers operating screens and data pads.  Presently, Anakin enters.

 Officer:  Sir.

 Anakin:  Lt.  Progress?

 Officer:  Yes sir.  We have successfully decrypted the rebel’s database.

 Anakin:  Good, good.  

 Officer:  We have security footage of over two dozen persons believed to be rebel agents who boarded Maul’s starship.  Here, i’ll show you…

 A series of images flash across the screen, humans, aliens, they flash by...then...a woman...it is Padme...Anakin's face twists in utter horror and loss...he is lost for a moment, absolutely adrift without bearing...then...it passes.

 Officer:  Sir?

 Anakin:  Nothing...it was..nothing…

 Officer  There is also the matter of…

 Music crescendos, you lose the officer voice as the camera zooms slowly in on Anakin's face.  His expression hardens.  

 Anakin:  Captain…..

 Officer:  (Surprised)  Yes?

 Anakin:  Something...has come up.

 Officer:  Of course.  We can continue this briefing at your convenience.

 Anakin nods and turns, his face dark, he strides out of the room.

 Scene changes.  You see Padme again alone in her quarters, a mirror of the earlier scene, she looks out of the window but this time her expression is darker.  The door opens.  It is Anakin.  

 Anakin:  Padme…

 Padme:  Anakin, how was the council…(Moving toward him)  I heard…

 Anakin:  Wait…(Raising his hand and turning away.)   What...did you....you…

 Padme:  (Taken aback)  Anakin…

 Anakin:  (Accusatory) You...you…..

 Padme (Suddenly afraid)  What is it?

 Anakin:  How could you?  (He move toward her)

 Padme:  What?

 She backs up, he looms above her,  a storm cloud of wrath.  

 Anakin:  You.... Helped..him.

 Padme:  Who?

 Anakin:  You know...who (angry)...i’m..talking about……..

They are silent...Padme’s eyes go wide with realisation

 Padme:  No.. we..just.. I

 Anakin:  You...just..what...what?  Joined the most wanted terrorist in the Galaxy?  No.  No. No no no.  I know you meant it.  Just…(she tries to interject)  be quiet.  You knew what you meant to do.  So accept the consequences.  

 Padme:  Anakin...please

 Anakin: No way, you lost it.  You’re lucky I love you, I cleared out the whole archive of your image, otherwise you would be in Republic interrogation right now.

 Padme:  (Scared)  Anakin…

 Anakin:  Stop!  I...I feel nothing for you right now…

 Padme:  Please…

 He turns toward the doorway.. Then throws a dark glance over his shoulder.  

 Anakin:  You’re...not going..anywhere.

 Padme’s eyebrows raise in realization, then Anakin is gone, the room door shut and locked from the outside.  Padme pushes at the controls, but she is trapped.  She sits back in horror.

 Scene change, you see Obiwan standing by a ruined building somewhere in the outskirts of Coruscant.  Presently a speed approaches, kicking up dust.  Obiwan turns and watches apprehensively.  The speeder pulls up, Saw jumps out.

.

Saw:  Obiwan...I came as soon as i could….

 Obiwan:  I’m afraid there isn’t a moment to lose...Anakin has taken Padme prisoner….

 Saw:  (Shocked)  No….we have to help her!

 Obiwan:  Of course...that’s why i came to you...just. We have to be cautious...Anakin is powerful in the force…..

 Saw:   Yes...of course...I..just...fear for Padme’s safety..

 Obiwan:  As do I…

 Saw:  Tell me what to do… I will do whatever it takes.

 Obiwan….(Unsure)  Await my command.  I’m going to find more information, if i don’t return...take whatever measures you think are necessary… Make sure Padme is safe.  I trust you.  

 Saw nods, a grave and serious look in his eyes.

 Saw:  Thank you...I trust you to, make sure she is safe….I...I love her...you know?

 Obiwan nods.  

 Obiwan:  I know.  I promise you she will be safe.

 Saw:  Thank you.

 Obiwan nods, then exits with great purpose.

 Scene cuts, it is night, you see two hooded figures working their way toward an estate.  It is Obiwan and Saw, they look tense.  

 Saw:  This is it...we need to strike hard and fast.  Don’t leave them any time to regroup or gain the upper hand.

 Obiwan nods, they both draw blasters.

 Saw:  On my mark….Mark!

 They dash from hiding, you see a group of stormtroopers guarding the gate to the estate, Obiwan and Saw blast them down with a barrage of fire, they don’t have a moment to react.  Climbing the gate, they run towards the massive manor house.  You already hear alarms ringing.

 At the door there are two Jedi guards, they draw lightsabers.

 Obiwan:  I’ll handle this.

 Saw:  I’ll take the long way!

 He turns and runs out into the darkness.  Obiwan draws his saber, it ignites in a blue white fire.  The two Jedi attack, Obiwan moves expertly, keeping his opponents lined up he duels with one of them before cutting him down.  Leveling his saber at the other Jedi, he stands with confidence.  The other Jedi is shaking, then throws the saber down and runs off into the night.

 Obiwan turns off his blade and opens the door, there is a barrage of fire from inside the house, drawing his blaster, Obiwan takes cover and tries to fight back, but is pinned down.

 Scene changes, you see Padme in her room looking upset.  Then suddenly there is the sound of a scuffle outside the door, Padme looks up apprehensively.  The door slides open, it is Saw.  

 Padme:  Saw!

 Saw:  Padme!

 They embrace warmly.  

Saw:  There isn’t much time, Obiwan is here with me.  Take this.

 He hands her a lightsaber.  A look of determination comes into Padme’s eyes.  She grasps the blade and together they run out of the room.  Scene cuts to Obiwan who is still pinned down.  Suddenly the shots stop and you hear the sounds of battle inside.  Obiwan rushes in and sees Saw and Padme finishing off the troopers.

 Suddenly ten Jedi run into the room, they draw sabers, surrounding the group.  They gather together as the Jedi close in, Padme and Obiwan with lightsabers drawn and Saw with blaster pointed.  

 Padme attacks, her unexpected wrath catches the Jedi by surprise her first wild swinging attacks bring down four opponents.  Then she regains control and attacks more strategically, cutting down two more opponents.  Obiwan joins the fray.  Together they tear through their enemies who never regain the upper hand.  Obiwan duels his opponents and cuts them down with clean efficiency, they both keep Saw protected, he is standing helpless.  Finally the last two Jedi each duel Obiwan and Padme, they fight with great skill.  Padme kills her opponent, then Obiwan does the same shortly after.  The fight is over, they stand stunned for a moment in the silence.  

 Anakin:  You...traitors.

 They turn, Anakin stands, his face contorted with rage.  Lightsaber glowing. 

 Obiwan:  (Turning and bringing his saber to a middle position)  Don’t try it Anakin.

 Anakin: (Matching his stance) I’m more powerful than you can possibly imagine.

 Obiwan:  Padme!  Saw!  Get out of here!

 Padme:  I can help!

 Obiwan:  You need to get to safety...I can handle this.

 Padme and Saw run.  Anakin and Obiwan face each other for a moment.

 Anakin attacks, he lunges forward, his whole weight behind the devastating overhead blow.  Most people would simply have been cut down by the pure force of it, but Obiwan dodges expertly catching Anakin’s blade on his own and turning to redirect the force. As he turns Obiwan disengages and attempts a fast high attack against Anakin.  He barely blocks.  

 Anakin turns and makes another lunging attack, but this time swings his saber in a few quick thrusts, Obiwan parries but is knocked backward by the force of his attack and falls.  Anakin leaps forward to kill him but Obiwan rolls out of the way and leaps to his feet.  Anakin turns and prepares to attack again.  Obiwan runs, he turns and dashes for the exit.  Anakin rushes after him but is slower, Obiwan escapes.  You see Anakin, saber still lit, standing at the door of the estate.  He screams into the night.

 Anakin:  Traitor!  You filthy traitor!  I’ll kill you!  You hear me!  I’ll kill you!  I’ll hunt you down!  I’ll never stop…

 Scene cuts, you see Obiwan, Saw and Padme running down the street.  They stop finally to rest in an ally.  They sit silently for a moment.

 Saw:  The transport ship is not far from here, we need to hurry…

 Padme:  Where are we going?

 Saw:  My allies have a small base on Dantooine.

 Padme:  (Catching her breath)  Thank you...both of you…

 Obiwan:  Of course, I’m just sorry...I couldn't do anything to help..him.

 Padme:  (Sadly)  So am I.

 They sit silently for a moment.

 Saw:  We should keep moving. 

 Padme and Obiwan nod and they leave the alley.

 Scene changes, you see Padme, Obiwan and Saw sitting in the transport ship, waiting to reach Dantooine.  They seem exhausted but relieved.

 Obiwan:  We made it...I almost thought for a moment there…

 Padme:  Me to...that close…

 Saw:  It’s over, we did it.

 Padme:  I’m afraid this isn’t over, I’m worried about how far Anakin might go…

 They sit in silence for a moment.

 Obiwan:  I’m going to check our hyperspace trajectory.  I’ll be back in a few minutes.

 He stands and goes out a door to the cockpit.  Saw and Padme sit together in silence for a moment.

 Saw:  I’m really glad you’re safe…

 Padme:  (Smiling sadly)  Me to…

 Saw:  I...I don’t know what I would do if something happened.

 Padme:  Don’t talk like that!  I’m fine, just...a little shaken.

 Saw:  I mean...I just..you’re really special to me.

 Padme blushes a little and looks him in the eye, smiling slightly

 Padme:  You’re special to me to Saw.

 They look into each other’s eyes for a few moments and then Padme leans forward and they kiss tenderly, embracing.

 Saw:  I...love you.  I’ve always loved you.

 Padme:  I know.

 They kiss again.

 Scene change, you see a blue green planet from orbit, presently, a transport ship jumps in from hyperspace, it descends toward the planets surface.  Scene changes, you see a small camp of prefab shelters in a large clearing in a forest.  Various people are going about tasks.  You see the transport land a distance away.  A ramp extends and Obiwan, Saw and Padme emerge.  Several rebels step forward to meet them.

 Rebel:  Saw!  Welcome to Dantooine...when we heard about Maul we feared the worst.

 Saw:  No, I’m alive.  I’ve brought some friends from Coruscant with me. (He gestures to Padme and Obiwan who stand awkwardly.)

 Rebel:  Good, we could use a few extra hands around here.

 Saw looks amused, the rebel turns and walks away.  Saw, Padme and Obiwan go into the camp.

 Scene changes, you see Dantooine from orbit.  Then three star destroyers jump from hyperspace.  Scene cuts to a shot of Anakin standing on the bridge of one of the destroyers, his face is full of wrath.  Cut back to space, you see rebel ships moving to intercept, there is a fierce battle, tie fighters wings deploy and duel with rebel fighter wings.  Two of the destroyers engage while the third descends to toward the planets surface.  

 Scene cuts, you see the rebel base in the foreground and the destroyer landing in the distance, people are rushing around preparing defenses, you see Obiwan and Padme looking at the destroyer in fear.

 Padme:  It’s...him.

 They stand in silent fear.  Scene changes, you see masses of stormtroopers running toward the camp, suddenly they open fire, there is a fierce battle, the troopers are pushed back by the initial ferocity of the rebel response but they regain their momentum and strike forward.  You see several rebel Jedi draw lightsabers and attack, cutting down troops.  Smoke fills the air and there is chaos.  Day turns to night.

 Suddenly through the smoke you see a blue lightsaber ignite.  Anakin attacks, he is unstoppable.  He blocks blaster shots and cuts down rebels left and right.  Jedi attack him and he fends them off with ease cutting them down effortlessly, the rage and fury unleashed in his face.

 Anakin stands in the center of the camp, all his enemies dead, surrounded by smoke, he looks about, searching with both eye and feeling, for Padme.  Then, suddenly, the smoke ahead clears.  There is a small figure...it is master Yoda.  

 Anakin looks surprised, then enraged, he draws his saber and moves to attack.  Yoda shakes his head and raises his hand.  Anakin is lifted into the air, his saber drops, he is a helpless captive of the force.  Then, Yoda closes his fist.  Ribs snap, bones are crushed, tearing through flesh, Anakin’s whole body is twisted and broken, Yoda lowers his arm, Anakin sinks to the ground, a ruin of his former self.  

 Yoda turns away in disgust.  You see Padme, Saw and Obiwan boarding a ship which takes off, then you see it leaving orbit.

 Scene cuts, you see a shot of Anakin being lifted onto a stretcher by stormtroopers and carried onto a ship, his face is torn with anguish.  You see medical bots working on him, shot stays focused on his face as he moves through different situations, into a medical pod, then you see robots fitting a robotic suit over his shattered body, then they strap a respirator and helmet over his head, transforming Anakin into Darth Vader.

 Scene cuts, it is Palpatine’s office.  He sits reading from a screen.  Presently you see Darth Vader enter, he seems awkward in the towering suit.

 Vader:  Chancellor…

 Palpatine:  (Angry)  General Skywalker, your foolishness is only equal to your stupidity!  You have cost us a great many lives, have the decency next time to die on the battlefield and rid us of your incompetence.

 Vader:  Sir...I..

 Palpatine:  Silence.  You have taken liberty with my good will far enough.  From now on you will operate under my strict command.

 Vader:  (Growing enraged)  I don’t have to listen to this!  I’m resigning my commission.

 Palpatine:  Ohhh… no.  You have barely begun to realize your true power and value to the Republic.  (Rising)  You’re not going anywhere.

 Vader:  (Very Angry)  Who do you think you are to stop me?

 Palpatine is silent and smiles.  Then he raises his hands and a blast of blue electric force lightning shoots from his fingers and tears across Vader’s body.  He stumbles back and collapses against the wall, then falls pitifully to the ground, his breath raspy.  Palpatine walks towards him menacingly his hands raised.  Vader tries to crawl away.

 Palpatine:  You see, I am a Jedi of great and terrible power!  You are pathetic, worthless, empty.  You’re life is meaningless without me.  Now… you will call me...master.

 Vader:  (Broken)  Yes…..my master.

 Palpatine:  Good...now, you are still in command of the fleet.  Do your duty General.

 Vader stands shaken and bows.

 Vader:  Yes my master.

He leaves.  Scene cuts to shot of Vader standing on the bridge of a Destroyer, you see the fleet scattered about, music is eerie and atmospheric, camera zooms out from Vader and then out of the ship, continuing to zoom out until you see the whole fleet arrayed in orbit around Coruscant.  Cut to credits,  music continues.

Starring:  

Natalie Portman -  Padme

Ewen Mcgregor-  Obiwan Kenobi

Orson Wells-  Anakin Skywalker

Daniel Kaluuya-  Saw Guerrara

Ian McDiarmid-  Chancellor Palpatine

Ray Park-  Maul

Frank Oz-  Yoda

Written by Travis Howard and Lucas Bonnet

Part of the Star Wars Alternative Universe.  2019